Tuesday, September 19, 2017
Developing a website
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UK Social Media Stats
The UK’s population is over 65 million, with a massive 92.6% of us having access to the Internet. Social media usage is through the roof, with over 38 million active social media users in 2016, which is 63% of the entire population!
But surely the social media landscape hasn’t changed since 2013? We take a look back at 2013 UK social media stats compared to today to see what a difference 3 years had made…
how much time per day?
How many hours did we spend, on average, using social media every day? According to data from We Are Social released in Jan 2016, we spent an average of 1 hr 29 minutes using social media across all devices – with the overall time spent online at around 2 hrs 51 minutes per day.
In 2013 there were 30 million Facebook users – that’s still very impressive because in 2001 there were less than 20 million people with actual Internet (hard to believe now!).
The age split in Facebook users hasn’t changed as much as everyone assumes. In 2013 the 15 – 24 year olds were the biggest proportion of Facebook users by age at 25%, with the 25 – 34 year olds following close behind at 24%. This year it seems all the age ranges are levelling out with regards to age ranges – the gaps are much closer. In 2013 the gap between Facebook users aged 55+ and 15 – 24 years old was 10%, but in 2016 it’s just 4%! This could mean as the population ages, so does the distribution of Facebook users as the younger generations join newer social networks – ah, a sign of the times!
We also noticed that the biggest increase in users in a single age-group was the over 55s with an increase of 6% which dwarves the others in comparison. This could be due to the older generation becoming more tech-savvy as they want to keep in touch with friends and relatives. Silversurfers CEO Martin Lock even claimed that some of the over 55s may also be using Facebook to ‘alleviate loneliness in later years.’
But Facebook is still the top dog in terms of top active social platforms, despite slowing down in membership growth. Facebook experienced 6.3% UK user growth in 2013 but in 2016 it’s only reached 2.8% so far (and last year it was only 3.4%).
Instagram has exploded in the last few years, with a few people becoming ‘Instagram famous’ in their own right. But in 2013 it had only been a year since Facebook purchased the app for around $750 million. Of the total internet users in the UK, 37% of 18 to 29 year olds used Instagram regularly. In 2016 Instagram reported it had 14 million monthly active users in the UK – that’s about the total population of Wales, London and Manchester combined! It was reported that 39% of UK users are aged 16 – 24 years old.
At the end of 2013 Twitter had 15 million active UK users – but recently the social media platform has gone very quiet when it comes to official figures. The latest numbers we could find were from We Are Social at 12.4 million active users. This significant drop could be related to the rise of social media giants such as Snapchat and Instagram.
Of the active Twitter users in 2013, 31% were aged between 15 and 24, 26% were aged 25 – 34, 25% were aged 35 – 44 and 19% were aged 45+. Interestingly enough, come the start of 2016, 28% of over 45s were using Twitter which is the biggest jump of any of the age groups. This could be because older business owners are ditching more traditional methods of marketing and are starting to see the benefits of Twitter for advertising, reaching out to customers and earning direct sales.
snapchat
In July 2011 Snapchat had 127 users (and it was called Picaboo – which explains the lil’ ghost logo), by 2013 the world is sending 150 million snaps per day and the company introduced Snapchat Stories. In September 2015 they brought out Selfie Lenses including the face swapping function, the rainbow puker and many many many more. At first, users had to pay for some of the features at the Lens Store, but just a couple of months later Snapchat changed its mind and now gives all filters away for free so it can focus on advertising instead. The company is offering other companies to sponsor some of the filters for an advertising fee – smart thinking! That’s why Snapchat remains one of the biggest social platforms with everyone using it from universities to individuals.
UK Social Media Statistics for 2017
UK Social Media Statistics for 2017
The tree is down and the tinsel is wilting, so it must be time for our annual review of social media use in the UK at the start of 2017. We do this for two reasons: one, because statistics that focus purely on UK based users can be hard to come by, and two, because it also helps us clarify our own “hunches” about how things are going for each of the major sites, and use that information when we’re working with our business and third sector clients in the UK.
There’s also some good news: UK specific statistics have become a little easier to find this year. Props must go to agency We Are Flint for carrying out their own primary research during 2016, complete with actual transparency about how the research was carried out (link below to the entire report) and Statista.com is also offering a decent amount of open source information. We’re grateful to both organisations for those contributions, as well as the other source sites linked within this post.
UK social media in 2017: general thoughts
We talked in our last annual update about the fact that the mainstream social media market is now mature. Nothing has changed there; there haven’t been any significant upsets this year, and it’s been a while since a genuinely “new” entrant offered anything different. The “Big 3″ in the UK (Facebook, Twitter, LinkedIn) have more or less stayed static in user terms for several years. Apart from a potentially interesting Twitter vs Instagram clash, the only action is around the smaller players and ancilliary apps like Snapchat which we see more as utilities than social networks.
We’re going to kick off this year with two charts that we think contain the most crucial information for social media strategy planning if you’re a UK business: Total UK Users by Site (based on the current “best estimate” as described below, where the site has not provided figures), and the percentage of those users who log in daily.
Remember, a registered user who never goes onto the site isn’t going to be a viable target for your marketing!
UK Facebook Users 2017
So let’s kick off our indepth review with the Big Daddy, Facebook. Once again the overall number hasn’t budged all that much; we’re looking at around 32 million user accounts in the UK. That’s been pretty steady for around three years now. We Are Flint’s report puts the proportion of over 18s in the UK who use Facebook at 78% – so still, after all these years, probably the single most consolidated channel available to marketers for accessing most of the population in one place (after snail mail, which surely only those printing their own money can afford these days!).
We also have, courtesy of Statista.com. a nice breakdown of the demographics within that figure, which does offer some interesting observations. No, Facebook probably isn’t “cool” any more. My ageing Samsung Galaxy, if it was ever cool, certainly isn’t now either, but that doesn’t stop me using it constantly.
Looking at these stats, the same is true of Facebook: the largest demographic is the 20-29 year olds, clearly showing that it’s not just everyone’s Mum using Facebook these days.
With organic post reach now sitting at around a measly 10%, the major area of interest for businesses using Facebook now is the development of new types of advertising, and the fluctuation in cost. This year we’ve seen enhancements or new introductions in ever more sophisticated ad targeting – Lookalike Audiences, Dynamic Ads and a whole suite of options around remarketing to website visitors. For large ecommerce sites this is a godsend. For smaller businesses, anecdotally it seems as though the cost of reaching the standard 1,000 eyeballs, or achieving a good volume of link clicks, is on the increase. This may be partly due to the more targeted types of advertising being more costly, which is not unreasonable if the results match up to their promise.
With organic post reach now sitting at around a measly 10%, the major area of interest for businesses using Facebook now is the development of new types of advertising, and the fluctuation in cost. This year we’ve seen enhancements or new introductions in ever more sophisticated ad targeting – Lookalike Audiences, Dynamic Ads and a whole suite of options around remarketing to website visitors. For large ecommerce sites this is a godsend. For smaller businesses, anecdotally it seems as though the cost of reaching the standard 1,000 eyeballs, or achieving a good volume of link clicks, is on the increase. This may be partly due to the more targeted types of advertising being more costly, which is not unreasonable if the results match up to their promise.
There are numerous studies showing that social media advertising is by far the cheapest medium. Ad Espresso tell us that overall CPM on Facebook actually declined during 2016, but there are so many factors influencing what any individual business will spend that it’s almost inevitable that your mileage will vary. As an aside, if you’re interested in what factors affect your ad spend, and how they affect it, Ad Espresso have a superb report here covering every aspect, from ad placement to the demographic being targeted, and the day and even hour that the advert runs in.
UK LinkedIn users 2017
Like all the mature sites, LinkedIn’s growth is also slowing, but there is still some growth. Last year we had a figure of around 19 million UK users; this year the figure is 21 million. You can see LinkedIn’s own global figures here.
When planning your strategy, though, it’s important to remember that the average user uses LinkedIn very different to the way Facebook’s average user uses Facebook. And that’s why you won’t see too much emphasis on metrics such as “monthly active users” or time spent on the site in an average month. Unless they are actively job hunting, or actively using LinkedIn as part of their job role (think Enterprise software sales execs), we believe that most people who are registered with LinkedIn, don’t necessarily touch that account for weeks at a time.
Again we’re going on anecdotal evidence with a pinch of common sense – by its very nature, LinkedIn’s content offering doesn’t begin to compare with how compelling Facebook’s is, where users are on the site multiple times each day exchanging banter with their social networks or just surfing for something to cheer themselves up.
UK Instagram Users 2017
Instagram themselves haven’t released any new data since that which we used in last year’s report, giving us 14 million Monthly Active Users in the UK, from a global MAU figure of 300 million. The global figure was updated in December 2016 to an impressive 600 million, but it would basically be a total guess as to whether the UK’s growth has kept pace with the global growth.
It’s hard to tell at this point whether Instagram is continuing to cannibalise Twitter’s market, particularly among the younger demographic – that seemed to be the case in previous years, but the research that we’re referencing here doesn’t really support it. Which is good from a marketing point of view, because the lack of native “retweet” function and inability to include links in a post, means that driving anything other than general brand awareness is harder work on Instagram!
The We Are Flint survey suggested that 29% of UK adults use Instagram, which would give us a figure around the 19 million mark. The same report also gives a proportion of 64% of users as being under 30 – but gives the same figure for Twitter, which has generally been considered to be an older demographic thus far. Even more interestingly, Instagram has something of a peak in the higher income brackets (though not as much as Twitter does); 46% of users reported a household income of over £48k per annum.
From a general strategy point of view, Instagram has joined Facebook and Twitter this year in filtering which of your followed accounts’ posts you actually see. That seems a clear pointer that in the not too distant future, you can expect to be paying Instagram for any kind of guaranteed reach at all, in the same way we now have to pay for reach on Facebook.
UK Pinterest Users 2017
We’ve not had anything directly from Pinterest this year on the subject of UK user numbers, so the stats below come from third party research.
All the indications though are that Pinterest’s early period of stellar growth has definitely stalled. Although Pinterest did tell us that their global MAU figure was up to 150 million in October of 2016, just 5% of the UK population log in to Pinterest on a daily basis.
Interestingly, at some point the Pinterest user demographic has got a LOT younger. In the US, and in the early days of UK use, older (as well as more affluent) users were in the majority. In 2017 however, research from both Statista and We Are Flint suggests that 50%+ of Pinterest users are in the 18-29 age bracket.
The female gender bias has persisted however, with 38% of women who are online reporting that they use Pinterest, whereas only 20% of men say the same thing.
In terms of how people are actually using the site (which should give you some clues as to whether your business will be commercially successful there), here’s a useful summary from Pinterest’s CEO, Ben Silbermann :
Pinterest is more of a personal tool than a social one. People don’t come to see what their friends are doing. (There are lots of other great places out there for that!) Instead, they come to Pinterest to find ideas to try, figure out which ones they love, and learn a little bit about themselves in the process.
UK Twitter Users 2017
Twitter did provide a very minimal status update around the middle of last year, which gave a global MAU figure of 313 million, and 79% of those accounts being outside the US. That would be sufficient to keep them ahead of Instagram in the global rankings, just.
Other independent research gives us figures of 45% of UK Online Adults using Twitter, with 37% of those account holders logging in daily. Using the ONS figure of 45.9 million for the UK’s online population, that would give us a user base of around 20 million. That seems plausible, if maybe a little generous, compared to the last “official” UK figure of 13 million which was provided in 2013.
The same research reports a surprisingly young demographic, too: 64% of users are 18-29, 57% 30-49, and 33% 50-61. The more affluent citizens are also over-represented on Twitter, with 62% in the 48K+ household income bracket – bearing in mind that the median UK household income this year was just over £26k.
If you’re interested in how people are actually using Twitter, there’s a really good, and up to date, report here from the BBC. From that we learn that a relatively small number of highly active users dominate in terms of posting content – 1% of accounts are responsible for 20% of all tweets, and 85% of all tweets are accounted for by just 15% of total accounts.
The number of actual tweets sent each day has remained almost constant since 2013, despite increases in monthly active users. So, if you’re planning a campaign on Twitter, be aware that there are a *lot* of users out there who read but never post!
So there we have it: the social media landscape for the UK in 2017. As ever, we hope it’ll help you plan your strategy – and if you need some help figuring out what you should be using and how, get in touch!
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Tuesday, September 12, 2017
Sales Copywriting Techniques
4 Persuasive Sales Copywriting Techniques to be a More Effective Copywriter — Starting Today!
Understand them and start applying them to all the copy you review. You’ll end up with sales copy (and content, too) that’s more compelling, more engaging, and more persuasive.
Technique #1: The Power of One©
Let’s start by asking this question…
The Power of One© is critical to marketers.
Here’s a recent Power of One© example written by “A-list” copywriter Carline Anglade-Cole. It’s all about the “Beet Secret”…
This is a far more powerful approach than hitting the reader with a cluster of promises they must sift through for the one that appeals to them.
Here’s an example of too many ideas for a product that teaches people how to create their own Money-Making Website…
“Turn something you love to do in your spare time into $750 … $1,500 … $3,500 and upward per month.
Money that comes in whether you’re working, sleeping, playing golf, or relaxing on the beach.
And … No technical skills needed …
No more answering to a boss …
Make Google work for you!”
Turn something you love to do in your spare time into $750 … $1,500 … $3,500 and upward per month.
Money that comes in whether you’re working, sleeping, playing golf, or relaxing on the beach.”
Next, when you’re working with a copywriter, ideally, you should agree on the core idea with the copywriter before he or she begins writing.
And then, as you’re reviewing the piece, you want to be sure that the core idea is woven throughout the entire promotion, just as it is in sales page below…
In the image above, you see The Power of One© technique broken down for a product that teaches people how to write and publish their own ebooks. The copy of the entire sales page includes:
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It’s the first thing the reader sees and might be the only thing they read.
When someone lands on a web page or opens a letter, they make a snap judgment about whether to read it based on whether they think there’s something valuable in it for them.
(RELATED: Want More Traffic From Google? Use these 5 Blog Post Headline Templates)
At AWAI, we teach a headline-review technique called the 4 U’s©.
It’s a scoring method that both writers and non-writers can use to create powerful headlines that ATTRACT attention and COMPEL your target customers to dive into the rest of your message.
The 4 U’s© are:
If you sell golf shoes, then “Is This the Most Comfortable Golf Shoe Ever?” would entice a golfer with a clearly useful benefit.
They make what you’re promising more real, believable, and achievable.
Rather than “Save Money on a New Car,” write “Save $1,999 on a New Audi.”
Change “Boost Your Profits,” to “How to Get 3,800% R.O.I.”
Instead of “New Slimming Secret,” try “New Slimming Secret from Osaka, Japan.”
Bring a headline to life with:
It’s ideal when you have a real deadline or time element such as: “6 Stocks That Are Poised to Take Off Before Election Day.”
But… you can still apply this “U” when an urgent deadline is NOT applicable.
Here are a few classic headlines that also create a sense of urgency without a real deadline:
For instance, “How this Rare Manuka Honey Protects You from MRSA” is a unique headline — whereas “How to Protect Yourself From MRSA” is something you might read anywhere.
Rule of Thumb: At AWAI, we’ve found that a good headline contains at least two of the 4 U’s©.
Here are some more examples of headlines that use the 4 U’s©:
The 4 P’s© are the four elements EVERY piece of sales copy needs to be successful. They’re the framework to build your sales argument… the structure you need to follow to persuade your reader to take the action you want him to take.
They are:
A picture, in copywriting terms, is a real-life scenario or story that illustrates a problem or goal your prospect will have.
The following sample is the classic opening of a sales letter for International Living magazine. It taps into their prospect’s dreams of a luxurious, peaceful, and affordable retirement abroad.
Whatever you’re selling, your readers need to imagine themselves in the very real outcome…
The picture should come first, either in the headline or the lead copy. Then, you move on to…
Once you’ve created a picture in the reader’s mind, make a specific promise based on the best benefit of your product or service, showing how it can help create that ideal scenario or avoid the nightmare one.
Using our dental hygiene example, you could promise, “Healthy, white teeth in 21 days,” for instance.
Or a pain relief product might have this promise: “Enjoy natural relief from stiff, painful joints — starting right now!”
Here’s a powerful example of a promise from a wildly successful online Video Sales Letter:
But… remember The Power of One©. This single promise needs to recur throughout the copy.
Next, let’s talk about…
To make your promise effective, it must be credible and achievable.
So, the sales copy must offer solid proof that backs up your claims.
To make your prospect believe you, include:
Once you’ve proven your point, it’s time to get the reader to take action…
Getting the viewer to take action is known as a “push” or a “call-to-action” and it involves three steps:
This is known as “risk reversal” and could involve reminding them of the following:
(RELATED: Perpetual Traffic Episode 84: Ryan Deiss: 7 Questions I Ask Myself Before I Finish Writing Ad Copy)
And that leads us to our final method…
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You should insist that your copywriters include the FK score as part of their editing process for the following reasons:
Look at the Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level (7.2 in this example).
A score of 5.0 or less is ideal and shows that the copy is very readable. A score of 10.0 or above is poor and does not make for good sales copy.
If the copy is between 5-8, that’s okay. Look for “sections” that may be problematic and focus on those.
For example, you’ll want to look out for…
Remember, though, the FK score technique is only a tool. It can be used to improve the readability of copy.
But, if the writer hasn’t focused on The Power of One©, written a powerful headline using the 4 U’s©, and followed the 4 P’s© format, the copy won’t help make more sales.
(RELATED: These 5 “Copy Cosmetic” Mistakes Are Costing You Conversions)
Therefore, the FK score check should be done at the editing stage.
So, what’s next?
Looking to build your swipe file? Keep up with the popular news websites that have mastered the art of “clickbait,” too.
Clickbait is the term for eye-catching social media headlines that readers can’t resist clicking on, like this one:
While clickbait may have a bad connotation, it isn’t bad when it delivers on the promise of the headline. So, deliver that promise and that value!
You’ll see clickbait on these websites:
Adding these practices to the four persuasive sales copywriting techniques we taught in this article will help you and your writers craft sales copy that will generate leads and sales.
(NOTE: Is your sales copy seizing attention and sparking desire? Start crafting gripping, persuasive sales copy that flat-out sells when you become a Direct Response Copywriting Specialist.
Technique #1: The Power of One©
Let’s start by asking this question…
What is good writing?
Master Copywriter and business-building guru Mark Ford’s answer is:“Good writing is good thinking… clearly expressed.”At AWAI, we call this The Power of One©.
“To be a good copywriter,” continues Mark, “you need to be able to present good ideas clearly. And, the best way to do this is to limit yourself to a single idea. One good idea, clearly and convincingly presented, is better than a dozen so-so ideas strung together.”
The Power of One©:
- Emphasizes one good idea
- Stirs one core emotion
- Tells one captivating story
- Directs the prospect to one inevitable response
The Power of One© is critical to marketers.
It’s getting harder to break through the noise of today’s marketing landscape. One strong, core idea can help you do that.
To give you some examples, in his book, How to Write a Good Advertisement, Victor Schwab (the “greatest mail-order copywriter of all time”) reveals a list of successful headlines, 90% of which are based on The Power of One©. They include:- The Secret of Making People Like You
- Is the Life of a Child Worth $1 to You?
- To Men Who Want to Quit Work Someday
- Are You Ever Tongue-Tied at a Party?
- Who Else Wants a Screen Star Figure?
- You Can Laugh at Money Worries – If You Follow This Simple Plan
- When Doctors Feel Rotten This is What They Do
- How I Improved My Memory in One Evening
- Discover the Fortune That Lies Hidden in Your Salary
- How I Made a Fortune with a “Fool Idea”
- Have You a “Worry” Stock?
Here’s a recent Power of One© example written by “A-list” copywriter Carline Anglade-Cole. It’s all about the “Beet Secret”…
This is a far more powerful approach than hitting the reader with a cluster of promises they must sift through for the one that appeals to them.
Here’s an example of too many ideas for a product that teaches people how to create their own Money-Making Website…
“Turn something you love to do in your spare time into $750 … $1,500 … $3,500 and upward per month.
Money that comes in whether you’re working, sleeping, playing golf, or relaxing on the beach.
And … No technical skills needed …
No more answering to a boss …
Make Google work for you!”
And, here it is after the writer focused on The Power of One©…
“Make money in your spare time.Turn something you love to do in your spare time into $750 … $1,500 … $3,500 and upward per month.
Money that comes in whether you’re working, sleeping, playing golf, or relaxing on the beach.”
Next, when you’re working with a copywriter, ideally, you should agree on the core idea with the copywriter before he or she begins writing.
And then, as you’re reviewing the piece, you want to be sure that the core idea is woven throughout the entire promotion, just as it is in sales page below…
In the image above, you see The Power of One© technique broken down for a product that teaches people how to write and publish their own ebooks. The copy of the entire sales page includes:
- One Big Idea: There’s no product easier to create or sell online than an ebook.
- One Emotion the reader should feel: e.g.: “It’s simple! How exciting. I bet I can do this!”
- One Engaging Story to express your Big Idea: e.g.: “My very first ebook has generated $20,727 in sales.”
- One Big Promise: e.g.: “You could make huge profits very quickly by creating and selling your own ebooks.”
- One Action they need to take to achieve this outcome: e.g.: “The only way to get this book for $19 is to ‘click here now.’”
(NOTE: Is your sales copy seizing attention and sparking desire? Start crafting gripping, persuasive sales copy that flat-out sells when you become a Direct Response Copywriting Specialist. Learn more now — before our premier sale ends!)
Persuasive Sales Copywriting Technique #2: The 4 U’s©
A headline does 90% of the work in any piece of sales copy.It’s the first thing the reader sees and might be the only thing they read.
When someone lands on a web page or opens a letter, they make a snap judgment about whether to read it based on whether they think there’s something valuable in it for them.
A good headline needs to:
- Grab attention
- Arouse interest
- Create desire
- Motivate someone to read on
(RELATED: Want More Traffic From Google? Use these 5 Blog Post Headline Templates)
At AWAI, we teach a headline-review technique called the 4 U’s©.
It’s a scoring method that both writers and non-writers can use to create powerful headlines that ATTRACT attention and COMPEL your target customers to dive into the rest of your message.
The 4 U’s© are:
1. Useful
A good headline should offer something USEFUL to the prospect.
For example, someone in need of relationship advice would find “7 Magic Words that Will Convince Any Woman to Date You” useful.
If they were looking for nutritional advice, then “The Kitchen Cabinet Food that Burns Away Body Fat” would be a useful idea.If you sell golf shoes, then “Is This the Most Comfortable Golf Shoe Ever?” would entice a golfer with a clearly useful benefit.
2. Ultra-Specific
Wherever possible, use SPECIFIC details.They make what you’re promising more real, believable, and achievable.
Rather than “Save Money on a New Car,” write “Save $1,999 on a New Audi.”
Change “Boost Your Profits,” to “How to Get 3,800% R.O.I.”
Instead of “New Slimming Secret,” try “New Slimming Secret from Osaka, Japan.”
Bring a headline to life with:
- Numbers
- Prices
- Dates
- Times
- Measurements
- Names
3. Urgent
Show that your message is TIME-SENSITIVE and cannot be ignored or left until later.It’s ideal when you have a real deadline or time element such as: “6 Stocks That Are Poised to Take Off Before Election Day.”
But… you can still apply this “U” when an urgent deadline is NOT applicable.
Here are a few classic headlines that also create a sense of urgency without a real deadline:
- “What Never… EVER to Eat on an Airplane!” — You’d want to know this before your next flight.
- “Are You Making This Mistake with Your English?” — You’d want to know this mistake ASAP to avoid embarrassment.
- “Erase Your Worse Pain… For Hours and Hours. Guaranteed.” — If you’re in pain, you’d want to know this solution now.
4. Unique
Try to bring out the UNIQUENESS of your message, idea, or story.For instance, “How this Rare Manuka Honey Protects You from MRSA” is a unique headline — whereas “How to Protect Yourself From MRSA” is something you might read anywhere.
Rule of Thumb: At AWAI, we’ve found that a good headline contains at least two of the 4 U’s©.
Here are some more examples of headlines that use the 4 U’s©:
- Give Me 5 Days and I’ll Give You the Secret of Speaking Spanish Like a Local!
- Do You Have One of The 7 Early Warning Signs of Dementia?
- 7 Proven Ways to Make $370-$1,100 a Week Selling Used Books on Amazon.com
- Ex-Bank Manager Reveals How to Clear Your Debts in 4 Steps
- This All-Natural Himalayan Tea Reduces Anxiety, Sleeplessness, and Stress with Every Sip
- Lose 37 Pounds in the Next 14 Weeks with Honey, Lemon, and Garlic
Persuasive Sales Copywriting Technique #3: The 4 P’s©
The 4 P’s© is a technique you can use to judge a whole piece of copy from top to bottom.The 4 P’s© are the four elements EVERY piece of sales copy needs to be successful. They’re the framework to build your sales argument… the structure you need to follow to persuade your reader to take the action you want him to take.
They are:
- Picture
- Promise
- Proof
- Push
A picture, in copywriting terms, is a real-life scenario or story that illustrates a problem or goal your prospect will have.
Good copy should get the reader to VISUALIZE the positive benefits of your product or service, or the negative outcomes they might experience without the help of your service or product.
To help the reader imagine this, share a scenario by painting a picture using words.The following sample is the classic opening of a sales letter for International Living magazine. It taps into their prospect’s dreams of a luxurious, peaceful, and affordable retirement abroad.
Whatever you’re selling, your readers need to imagine themselves in the very real outcome…
- The scent of the leather in their new Mercedes E-Class Cabriolet…
- The admiring looks they’ll get when they wear their skinny jeans…
- Their smiling wife and children as they surprise them with the holiday of a lifetime…
- NEGATIVE EMOTIONS: fear of bad breath, decaying teeth, and gum disease
- POSITIVE EMOTIONS: a more attractive smile, healthy teeth and gums
The picture should come first, either in the headline or the lead copy. Then, you move on to…
Once you’ve created a picture in the reader’s mind, make a specific promise based on the best benefit of your product or service, showing how it can help create that ideal scenario or avoid the nightmare one.
Using our dental hygiene example, you could promise, “Healthy, white teeth in 21 days,” for instance.
Or a pain relief product might have this promise: “Enjoy natural relief from stiff, painful joints — starting right now!”
Here’s a powerful example of a promise from a wildly successful online Video Sales Letter:
But… remember The Power of One©. This single promise needs to recur throughout the copy.
Next, let’s talk about…
To make your promise effective, it must be credible and achievable.
So, the sales copy must offer solid proof that backs up your claims.
To make your prospect believe you, include:
- Facts: Back up your promise with statistics, charts, quotes, illustration, sales figures, examples, diagrams, etc., like Proactiv does here:
- Credentials: Who is the person behind the product or service? What qualifications, experience, or expertise do they have?
- Media Coverage: Showcase instances where you, your products, and/or services have been reviewed, quoted, or praised.
- Testimonials: Prove that your product or service works by showcasing testimonials. Give preference to those that highlight a major benefit rather than simply saying “It was great.” AWeber does a good job of this.
- Comparison: Compare your product to other types of products or services in terms of price, speed, reliability, effectiveness, and other factors.
- Track Record: Include trials, experiments, results, or real-life case studies. If you can “show and tell” with compelling visuals (before/after, charts, etc.), even better.
- Social Influence: Prospects will give more credence to an idea when they see others doing it. For instance, “We did a study of people in your town, and discovered that your neighbors chose SuperEnergy 6 to 1 over other similar drinks.”
- 91% of owners surveyed recommend Sleep Number
- Lasts twice as long as an innerspring
Once you’ve proven your point, it’s time to get the reader to take action…
Getting the viewer to take action is known as a “push” or a “call-to-action” and it involves three steps:
- Remind them of the urgency of the problem the product can solve.
- Tell them precisely what they need to do to get the benefits you’ve promised. For instance, tell them to click the link or give you a call.
- Explain how easy it is to take action now.
- Special Offer: This could include a discount, bonus extras, free delivery, or risk-free trial.
- Scarcity: This could be a limited release: “There are only 50 printed copies.” Or an offer with limited supply/availability: “These are the last 23 available.”
- Time Sensitivity: Why is acting quickly so important? “The deadline for your tax return is April XX.” Or, “You want to get this set up in time for Christmas.” Or, “If you wait until next month to do this, you might find yourself paying double for your heating.”
- Ease: Emphasize how easy and simple it is to order, and tell them how soon they can get the product and enjoy the benefits. For instance, “As soon as you click, you’ll get instant access,” or “I’ll rush you a copy in the first-class post,” or “You could be up and running within 3 days’ time.”
This is known as “risk reversal” and could involve reminding them of the following:
- Trial Offer: Either a risk-free trial or free trial membership.
- Return Policy: Money-back guarantee — say how and when they’ll get their money during the cooling-off period.
- Support and Contact: Reassure them with customer service contact details and support should they have problems.
(RELATED: Perpetual Traffic Episode 84: Ryan Deiss: 7 Questions I Ask Myself Before I Finish Writing Ad Copy)
And that leads us to our final method…
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Persuasive Sales Copywriting Technique #4: Flesch-Kincaid Score
The Flesch-Kincaid (FK) score will help you or your writers improve the readability of your copy because it rates text on a U.S. school grade level and provides a “grade.” For instance, an FK score of 6.8 is much easier to read than a score of 11.8.You should insist that your copywriters include the FK score as part of their editing process for the following reasons:
- Ease: You want to make it as quick and easy as possible for the reader to consume the message without pause or confusion. You can lose customers if the copy becomes boring or confusing at any point. To get across big, complex ideas, you need to write in a way a 5th grader can understand.
- Emotions: To tap into the emotions of your readers, you must pull down the language barriers. The more direct the copy, the more emotionally hard-hitting.
- Trust: To gain trust, you must sound like a real person who is “like” the reader and speaks in their language. What’s more, your customers’ brains are hardwired to trust simpler writing. The easier it is to read, the more believable it becomes.
- Action: If it isn’t absolutely clear what the reader needs to do and why, they’re less likely to take action and click the order button.
- Simply open the document, click on the Word drop-down menu, and then click on Preferences.
- Go to Spelling and Grammar and make sure the “Show readability statistics” option is checked.
- Run a Spelling and Grammar check.
- After you’ve completed the spelling and grammar check, a summary box will pop up like this:
Look at the Flesch-Kincaid Grade Level (7.2 in this example).
A score of 5.0 or less is ideal and shows that the copy is very readable. A score of 10.0 or above is poor and does not make for good sales copy.
If the copy is between 5-8, that’s okay. Look for “sections” that may be problematic and focus on those.
For example, you’ll want to look out for…
- Long sentences. See if you can shorten them.
- Too many adverbs.
- Flowery, overly poetic language.
- Jargon, business-speak or stuffy academic phrases.
- Clichés.
Remember, though, the FK score technique is only a tool. It can be used to improve the readability of copy.
But, if the writer hasn’t focused on The Power of One©, written a powerful headline using the 4 U’s©, and followed the 4 P’s© format, the copy won’t help make more sales.
(RELATED: These 5 “Copy Cosmetic” Mistakes Are Costing You Conversions)
Therefore, the FK score check should be done at the editing stage.
So, what’s next?
Ready to Make Sure Your Copy is the Best It Can Be, Generating Great Results?
Remember to follow these four AWAI-taught techniques when writing sales copy or reviewing drafts from your copywriters:- The Power of One©
- The 4 U’s© for headlines
- The 4 P’s©
- The FK Score
- emails
- sales letters
- ads
- online sales videos
- websites
Looking to build your swipe file? Keep up with the popular news websites that have mastered the art of “clickbait,” too.
Clickbait is the term for eye-catching social media headlines that readers can’t resist clicking on, like this one:
While clickbait may have a bad connotation, it isn’t bad when it delivers on the promise of the headline. So, deliver that promise and that value!
You’ll see clickbait on these websites:
Adding these practices to the four persuasive sales copywriting techniques we taught in this article will help you and your writers craft sales copy that will generate leads and sales.
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